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The cracks are starting slowly,
But they have been growing deeper
Like fissures of destructive fire
Searing away any hope of a normal life for a marionette.

The pain is growing stronger,
Digging away at flesh and bone,
Pulling already fragile pieces apart
Until there is nothing left to the doll.

Alice's madness is slowly returning,
And this Ace of Hearts is turning black.
Wonderland is falling apart petal by petal
But turning back means being eaten alive by the past.

The finish of the game will be worth it,
It must be the focus if anyone is to win here.
There isn't long now; its getting harder,
And that guarantees the end is near.

So as the wood splinters to pieces,
As the mind retreats within itself,
Remember that its almost over,
The impossible is possible together
if we don't crack together first.
"We're the only two who can make the impossible possible.... we must be magic."

For a Sister :blackrose:
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Sana-girl Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Alice's madness is slowly returning,
And this Ace of Hearts is turning black.
Wonderland is falling apart petal by petal
But turning back means being eaten alive by the past.

being an Alice in Wonderland lover, i find this stanza absolutely captivating. Its gorgeous! I love this whole poem, but that stanza was what really caught my attention.
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IPhantomSilver Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011
Thank you ;) I am glad because that one is one of my favorite stanzas in the poem.
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Dragynking Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I really like the imagery! Excellent piece!
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IPhantomSilver Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011
Thank you!
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Dragynking Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
no problem! =]
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Sakura2349 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
Instead of splintering can I explode
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IPhantomSilver Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
NO. :glomp:
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Sakura2349 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
Why?! Urgh one week
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IPhantomSilver Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
Because time doesn't speed up
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Sakura2349 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
Why does that mean I can't blow up
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