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A broken, bruised boy
Healing, helplessly  held
Away, asleep, alone.

A guarded ghost girl
Darkly denying details;
Intimate, important instants.

A fierce, forgotten friend
Bludgeoned, blackened, blue
Silent secrets stolen.

The boy, comatose.
The girl, catatonic.
The friend, dead.
The truth, lost.
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This came from my Advanced Creative Writing Poetry Class assignment. An interesting take on Allerterative and free verse.
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~SwankyPickle Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooh, I love the repetition and word usage.
(Especially the last bit.)
Wonderful job.
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:iconiphantomsilver:
Thank you very much
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~SwankyPickle Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are so welcome. It's a beautiful piece.
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